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January 4, 2013
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Sacrifice by Azlyn-Blackward Sacrifice by Azlyn-Blackward
I sacrifice
My very life
To have you at my side
Every night I see your face
Through the misty haze
You were mine,
And time never healed my scars
Deep inside
Sadness burns
I must return


FOR ONCE I DID A PAINTING... Here.. i'll leave this here... Enjoy.
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:icondeviantadviser:
Firstly, I must say that this is fantastic work as always, my friend, But as always, Every artist has its flaws, and sadly, I must point them out.

The first flaw I see, would be the painting itself. As well as the detail looks, The water-lines are easy to see, and most 'painting' is a bit smoother with color blending if you know what I eman. It's easy to see how many colors you put in and they're poorly blended together, so they all look a bit.. strange.

I also believe that your lighting is a bit off, theres lighting in the middle, but not where the actual lights are in the painting. Also the one arm that is semi-hidden behind, It looks like its growing out of his neck, or something..
Other then a few choppy lines, this piece was very well done for your first painting :)
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:iconohthehumanityplz:
Ohthehumanityplz Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
very interesting, I like the smoothness of this.
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:iconazlyn-blackward:
Azlyn-Blackward Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks <33
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:iconohthehumanityplz:
Ohthehumanityplz Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome.
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PictureOnProgress Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Not a bad painting:la:
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:iconazlyn-blackward:
Azlyn-Blackward Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks <33
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PictureOnProgress Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Not a problem:iconbrohugplz:
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